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Analysis of the Haiku structure

summer's end
my footprints in the sand
a little deeper

fin d'été
mes empreintes dans le sable
un peu plus profondes


Liu Chen-ou, Canada
cco 2016-03-1

Commentaire.

Autre haïku sur la Réalité augmentée. Il note le fait que l'auteur est conscient d'un changement, parfois d'un tournant. Quelque chose s'est modifié mais l'auteur ne sait pas exactement dire quoi. Il enregistre cela au travers d'un changement dans sa perception de ce qui l'entoure et qui y est inconsciemment lié.

Keywords

end_summer beach footprint

Structure of this haiku.

Schema and motifs :

Schéma :
  Motif : mmm059 -

Used techniques :

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

* absence - The main element is not explicit.
The haiku is structured around an unnamed element to which each image refers. The interest is to save the space that would be used by naming the element while having the effect it produces.

The haiku can appear as a vault from which the scaffolding has been removed. If the haiku is well composed, the main element is absent but everything refers to it.

This technique delays storage in memory because the reader must complete the discourse with the unnamed element so that the haiku is unambiguously understandable. It then acquires a higher memory weight.

* sss - Frequent haiku.
Frequent haiku.

* plus - Enhanced reality.
Something becomes more... A detail is getting stronger.

* avis - Opinion given by the author.
The author tells his/her views or an explanation. The speech is not neutral at the first level of reading/writing. This is not a haiku where the author explains to the reader what he or she should understand, usually completed and of no interest. Here, the author gives an indication that is part of the elements of the discourse in addition to the others and that is not a redundancy (redundancy, precision, explanation).

* auteur - Presence of the author.
Presence of the author in the haiku, the author stages himself but does not necessarily speak about him.

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Temps - Time.

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