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Analysis of the Haiku structure

ripening apples—
unable to button
my summer dress

pommes mûres—
impossible de boutonner
ma robe d'été


sage stone, USA
cco 2016-03-2

Commentaire.

Haïku intimiste basé sur le jeu de mots, l'analogie et l'humour. L'auteure parle d'elle mais indirectement. En fait, c'est comme si elle voyait la scène.

Keywords

woman humour erotic clothes robe

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* jeu_mots - Puns.
A pun, a double meaning word without being a pivot. This is often an occasion for a multi-level reading discourse with double meaning words. This device is linked to humour, to the comic of the situation.

* analogie - Puns.
A pun, a double meaning word without being a pivot. This is often an occasion for a multi-level reading discourse with double meaning words. This device is linked to humour, to the comic of the situation.

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Vie - Life.

Toute manifestation d'un être pour affirmer sa présence, sa survie, parfois dans un contexte qui lui est défavorable.

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