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Analysis of the Haiku structure

cooler mornings--
the honey slows down
from the spoon

(matins plus froids --
le miel prend plus de temps
de la cuillère)


Robyn Cairns, Australia
cco 2016-03-2

Commentaire.

Autre haïku de perception de la Réalité augmentée. L'auteure ressent un changement et le note au travers d'un fait.

Keywords

cold autumn

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* plus - Enhanced reality.
Something becomes more... A detail is getting stronger.

* avis - Opinion given by the author.
The author tells his/her views or an explanation. The speech is not neutral at the first level of reading/writing. This is not a haiku where the author explains to the reader what he or she should understand, usually completed and of no interest. Here, the author gives an indication that is part of the elements of the discourse in addition to the others and that is not a redundancy (redundancy, precision, explanation).

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