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Analysis of the Haiku structure

home alone--
sound of my fork
on the pasta bowl

seule à la maison --
le son de ma fourchette
dans le bol de pâtes


Robyn Cairns, Australia
cco 2016-03-2

Commentaire.

Attention accrue au bruit, réaction au silence de la solitude.

Keywords

loneliness sound

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

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