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Analysis of the Haiku structure

harvest moon rising ...
a tremble
in the migrant's voice

montée de la lune des moissons ...
un tremblement
dans la voix du migrant


Liu Chen-ou, Canada
cco 2016-04-1

Commentaire.

Autre haïku engagé. Le lecteur comprend le "message" de l'auteur sans que cela lui soit dit explicitement. C'est le "tremblement" qui contient le fond du discours. Il acquiert son efficacité dans sa mise en relation (juxtaposition d'éléments) avec "moissons". Les moissons sont le propre des sédentaires. Elles sont aussi l'image de la Vie, de la sécurité de vivre.

Keywords

harvest_moon refugee

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :


* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

Effects: liadyn - Binding with dynamics effects


At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 2-strs - Organization, surface structures


* engagé - Committed haïku.
Haïku with a political message or opinion, an involvement


Effects: liavec - Binding to the reader's experience.


At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 3-aut - Author's role


* absence - Committed haïku.
Haïku with a political message or opinion, an involvement


Effects: liavec - Binding to the reader's experience.


At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 3-aut - Author's role

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