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Analysis of the Haiku structure

caramels mous -
sur ma peau la morsure
des grêlons

Rahmatou Sangotte, France
cco 2016-04-1


Haïku physique basé sur des perceptions sensuelles (goût, toucher). Oppositions entre Moi versus le Monde (grêle) avec la peau comme Frontière, entre chaud (bouche) et froid (grêlons). Liaison entre bouche (caramels) et morsure.



Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* multisens - Synestesia - Multi-senses perception.
Haïkus using effects on several senses (hearing, touch, taste, vision, smell). They play on the phenomenon of resonance between feelings (Synesthesia). This device usually produces strong haikus because they are physical.

* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

* auteur - Presence of the author.
Presence of the author in the haiku, the author stages himself but does not necessarily speak about him.

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