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Café noir,
la beauté fêlée
du vieux bol


Gérard Maréchal, France
cco 2016-04-1

Commentaire.

Sabi. Le charme des choses qui ont vécu. On peut d'ailleurs écrire beaucoup sur ce haïku. Le vieux bol compagnon du soir ou du matin. Les archétypes de la Chute, du Temps qui passe, de la Fragilité. La Beauté blessée, abimée qui survit et à qui nous conservons notre attachement. La marque du Temps, les souvenirs... Et voilà le Noir du café, celui du Néant. Et ce bol toujours là.

Keywords

coffee cup color black

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* sabi - Sabi
The sabi is a concept of Japanese aesthetics, derived from Zen Buddhist concepts, linked to the feeling created by the alteration by time, the decrepitude of aging things, the patina of objects, the mark of Time. The charm of things that have lived (Vintage des Américains).

Are sabi: Used steps from an old staircase, worn clothing, a rusty railing, a patinated knob...

In connection with Sabi-wabi.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Japanese_aesthetics

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

* avis - Opinion given by the author.
The author tells his/her views or an explanation. The speech is not neutral at the first level of reading/writing. This is not a haiku where the author explains to the reader what he or she should understand, usually completed and of no interest. Here, the author gives an indication that is part of the elements of the discourse in addition to the others and that is not a redundancy (redundancy, precision, explanation).

* - Opinion given by the author.
The author tells his/her views or an explanation. The speech is not neutral at the first level of reading/writing. This is not a haiku where the author explains to the reader what he or she should understand, usually completed and of no interest. Here, the author gives an indication that is part of the elements of the discourse in addition to the others and that is not a redundancy (redundancy, precision, explanation).

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Fragilité - Fragility, tenuousness.

Quelque chose de fragile dans un univers "hostile". Qui emporte en lui quelque chose.

David, le petit être.

* T_PassePresent - Bubble of Past.

* T_Immobile - Frozen Time.

* - Frozen Time.

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