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he feeds's fruit treen
bluid'n bane
...reid reid aipples

he feeds his fruit trees
blood and bone
...red red apples

il nourrit ses arbres fruitiers
de sang et d'os
... rouges rouges les pommes


John McDonald, Scotland (UK)
cco 2016-04-1

Commentaire.

Dur ce discours. S'il est vrai qu'un amendement du sol est parfois composé de déchets d'abattoir, la précision de son contenu frappe l'esprit. Oppositions Vie (arbres, fruits) versus Mort (sang, os), animal versus végétal. Archétype du Cycle (de la Vie), où la Mort d'un être (sang et os) donne la Vie à un autre (les pommes). Liaison entre le rouge du sang et des pommes.

Keywords

tree fruit apple color red blood

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* juxtaposition - Juxtaposition.
Use of images placed side by side to create an effect superior to that of each separate image. It is not a resonance effect as in similarity but rather a composition effect as in a painting or still life.

As the juxtaposed images have no or very few common semes, they compose a new global image in relation to its components.

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

* détail - A detail is the key element of the haiku.
The strength of these haikus lies in a detail, either in its relationship to other elements or images, or in its own strength. It plays the active role and will be remembered.

We can recognize there the action of the archetype of the ActivePoint.

* fin - Final element give the clue.
A detail at the end reveals the real meaning of haiku.

* S21 - Caesura between L2 and L3.
Caesura between L2 and L3.

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Mort - Death.

Contexte de mort (deuil, décès, cimetière...) ou pulsion de mort (guerre, violence...).

* D_VieMort - Life <> Death.

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