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رياح خريفية
قميص جارتي المزهر
يسقط في حديقتي

vent d'automne
la chemise fleurie de ma voisine
dans mon jardin

رياح خريفية
قميص جارتي المزهر
يسقط في حديقتي


Mohamad Alsari, Syria
cco 2016-04-1

Commentaire.

Opposition Vie (fleurs) Mort (automne). La Vie au travers de la voisine…

Keywords

washing humour woman clothesline

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* simili - Similitudes.
Use of images with common semes. The sharing of common semes (qualities, characteristics) makes images reinforce each other. There is resonance because the mind makes the relationship between the two images.

A cup of tea and a lake share the fact that they are an expanse of liquid surrounded by a rim. We can "see" the image of one in the other.

* xxx - Undefined appeal.
Haïku having something undefinable that deserves further study.

* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

* partie - Active small part for the whole.
A small part is linked to a bigger. The part for the Whole.

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

* - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Vie - Life.

Toute manifestation d'un être pour affirmer sa présence, sa survie, parfois dans un contexte qui lui est défavorable.

* T_Immobile - Frozen Time.

* - Frozen Time.

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