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Analysis of the Haiku structure

after our quarrel
the frog resumes
his croaking

après notre querelle
la grenouille recommence
son coassement


Julie Warther, USA
cco 2016-04-1

Commentaire.

Haïku notant une transition. L'auteure a perçu la modification de l'environnement malgré le poids de la situation. Peut-être et même sûrement, y a-t-il une allusion moqueuse liant le coassement avec les paroles du partenaire... Donc deux lectures possibles de ce haïku. Cette technique permet d'accroître l'activité d'un discours si à l'étroit dans la forme.

Keywords

argument frog humour

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* soudain - Sudden modification.
The haiku describes a sudden, sometimes unexpected event. He grabs something that just happened. It appears as a transition between two states: before and after.

* atmosphere - Atmosphere.
Something emerges from all the elements that constitute haiku: a climate, an atmosphere. The author does not state this explicitly. It is the reader who reconstructs it from his or her own experience.

This is especially true in three-segment haiku, also called "grocery list". But this effect can also be achieved in other ways.

The mention of feelings related to the weather and taste adds a multisensory dimension to the atmosphere created.

* S1 - Folded sentence.
Haiku in one folded sentence.

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