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Analysis of the Haiku structure

frog by frog
the marsh erupts
with dusk

grenouille après grenouille
l'éruption du marais
avec le crépuscule


Sandi Pray, USA
cco 2016-04-2

Commentaire.

Haïku marqué par les sonorités "gr", "cr", "ér'", accentuant le cri sombre des grenouilles. J'aime bien la dynamique du son qui monte.

Keywords

frog sound evening pond

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* S1 - Folded sentence.
Haiku in one folded sentence.

* progression - Advance.
Structure with a spatial or time oriented advance.

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_ChoseActiveEnfouie - Hidden active things

Toute chose non nommée enfouie dans des profondeurs, qui serait active et produirait des effets perceptibles. Concept de l'Inconscient.
A différencier de la Chose Cachée, qui n'a pas d'activité au niveau profond.

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