Analysis of the Haiku structure
pink moon --
of what comes next
lune rose --
de ce qui vient après
Paul David Mena, USA
Comme d'habitude avec Paul David Mena, voici un haïku à double sens. Discours feuilleté. Deux lectures profondes (signifiés) pour une seule structure superficielle (signifiant).
erotic moon color pink
Structure of this haiku.
Used techniques :
* feuilleté - Multilevel discourse, layered haiku.
Haikus with two (or more) reading levels. A first objective level referring to a situation, another underlying level saying something else. The Chinese are fond of this type of discourse with many levels.
These various levels may be conscious or unconscious.
We find a little bit of this technique consciously applied in the weather haiku. The weather element can be understood as an mention to the weather and as the element that creates the atmosphere of haiku.
The two levels of discourse are conscious and disjointed and well visible in haiku tanka, of which they form the two parts. However, they overlap in the layered haiku.
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* avis - Opinion given by the author.
The author tells his/her views or an explanation. The speech is not neutral at the first level of reading/writing. This is not a haiku where the author explains to the reader what he or she should understand, usually completed and of no interest. Here, the author gives an indication that is part of the elements of the discourse in addition to the others and that is not a redundancy (redundancy, precision, explanation).
* détail - A detail is the key element of the haiku.
The strength of these haikus lies in a detail, either in its relationship to other elements or images, or in its own strength. It plays the active role and will be remembered.
We can recognize there the action of the archetype of the ActivePoint.
Archetypes and dialectics
* T_FuturPresent - Bubble of Future.
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