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Analysis of the Haiku structure

old pond
oil slick rainbows
slip in


Lorin Ford, Australia
cco 2016-04-2

Commentaire.

Version iconoclaste du célèbre haïku de Bashô... Le haïku, c'est aussi la dérision, le regard amusé et moqueur sur les choses.

Keywords

pond pollution humour

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :


* culturel - Use of external cultural reference.
The haiku is based on an external cultural element, well known by the reader. There is a sharing of an environment (place, situation...) or cultural element (music, painting...) that will seek memories or sensations in the memory and experience of the reader. This device saves a lot of space, nothing else is needed, the effect is achieved by the reader's contribution.

Effects: liavec - Binding to the reader's experience.


At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 5-strp - Deep structure (schemas, patterns, cultural, associations, similarities)

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