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Analysis of the Haiku structure

old pond
oil slick rainbows
slip in

Lorin Ford, Australia
cco 2016-04-2


Version iconoclaste du célèbre haïku de Bashô... Le haïku, c'est aussi la dérision, le regard amusé et moqueur sur les choses.


pond pollution humour

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* culturel - Use of external cultural reference.
The haiku is based on an external cultural element, well known by the reader. There is a sharing of an environment (place, situation...) or cultural element (music, painting...) that will seek memories or sensations in the memory and experience of the reader. This device saves a lot of space, nothing else is needed, the effect is achieved by the reader's contribution.

Effects: liavec - Binding to the reader's experience.

At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 5-strp - Deep structure (schemas, patterns, cultural, associations, similarities)

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