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Analysis of the Haiku structure

fleur de printemps –
la rose tatouée au bras
de la serveuse


Michel Duflo, France
cco 2016-04-2

Commentaire.

Analogie entre printemps et rose.

Keywords

woman bar humour roses flower

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* simili - Similitudes.
Use of images with common semes. The sharing of common semes (qualities, characteristics) makes images reinforce each other. There is resonance because the mind makes the relationship between the two images.

A cup of tea and a lake share the fact that they are an expanse of liquid surrounded by a rim. We can "see" the image of one in the other.

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