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Analysis of the Haiku structure

summer haze—
mother's faded notes
for dewberry jam

brume d'été —
les notes décolorées de maman
pour une confiture de mûres


sage stone, USA
cco 2016-05-1

Commentaire.

Similitude entre l'effacement de l'écriture et la brume d'été qui estompe le paysage. On a ici une transition de surface (on passe du paysage à un carnet) tout en ayant une continuité au niveau profond (l'effacement des choses).

Keywords

haze past memories jam

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* simili - Similitudes.
Use of images with common semes. The sharing of common semes (qualities, characteristics) makes images reinforce each other. There is resonance because the mind makes the relationship between the two images.

A cup of tea and a lake share the fact that they are an expanse of liquid surrounded by a rim. We can "see" the image of one in the other.

* trans_S - Transition in the surface discourse.
Surface transition.

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Temps - Time.

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