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Analysis of the Haiku structure

Out of the well
By the bucket I hunt
A moon

hors du puits
dans un seau j'attrape
une lune


Mohamad Alsari, Syria
cco 2016-05-2

Commentaire.

Voici un haïku sur le motif de la lune dans un récipient. C'est un motif fréquent qui combine des dialectiques Haut versus Bas, Grand versus Petit, de la Lumière versus l'Obscurité, les archétypes de la Lumière, du Monde en petit, de la Lumière tirée des Ténèbres (le puits). On peut y ajouter le lien très profond dans notre Imaginaire entre Lune et Eau.

Keywords

well moon reflection

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :


* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

Effects: liadyn - Binding with dynamics effects


At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 2-strs - Organization, surface structures


* auteur - Presence of the author.
Presence of the author in the haiku, the author stages himself but does not necessarily speak about him.

Effects: liavec - Binding to the reader's experience.


At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 3-aut - Author's role


* S1 - Folded sentence.
Haiku in one folded sentence.

Effects: decod - Decoding the structure.
Affects the time required to understand the speech by the time required to decode the structure. Groups the elements by physical and temporal caesuras.

At the level: 0-form - Formal level
Formal appearance, written forms.

Description level: 1-pres - Formal representation

Archetypes and dialectics

* D_HautBas - Up <> Down.

Une opposition entre ce qui est en Haut et ce qui est en Bas. Par exemple, le ciel et la terre, les étoiles et les lumières de la ville, les nuages et la mer...

* D_GrandPetit - Big <> Little.


* A_Lumière - The Light.

La Lumière.
A mettre en relation avec la Lumière dans la Nuit.

* A_Miniature - The Miniature.


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