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cage d'escalier -
derrière le son des télés
des sanglots


Ben Coudert, France
cco 2016-05-2

Commentaire.

Du haïku social. Parler des choses de la vie. Parler des tabous, car ils font partie de notre vie. Les bruits de la Vie. Tout est dit sans même en parler explicitement. Le détail pour le tout, une technique très efficace.

Keywords

sound TV violence urban woman

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :


* absence -


Effects: -


At the level: -


Description level: -


* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

Effects: liadyn - Binding with dynamics effects


At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 2-strs - Organization, surface structures


* dur - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

Effects: liadyn - Binding with dynamics effects


At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 2-strs - Organization, surface structures

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