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Analysis of the Haiku structure

il travaille au jardin
les poignets libres
sans rolex


Vincent Hoarau, France
cco 2016-05-2

Commentaire.

Un autre haïku social. Il faut attendre la fin pour comprendre le sens du discours. On aurait attendu un bracelet électronique de prisonnier en rééducation mais c'est ici un autre bracelet emprisonnant le personnage dans l'image qu'il veut/doit donner de lui. Belle satire sociale. A remarquer que le "message" est implicite et donc bien adapté au haïku engagé.

Keywords

social garden humour clock

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :


* engagé - Committed haïku.
Haïku with a political message or opinion, an involvement


Effects: liavec - Binding to the reader's experience.


At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 3-aut - Author's role


* absence - Committed haïku.
Haïku with a political message or opinion, an involvement


Effects: liavec - Binding to the reader's experience.


At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 3-aut - Author's role


* S1 - Folded sentence.
Haiku in one folded sentence.

Effects: decod - Decoding the structure.
Affects the time required to understand the speech by the time required to decode the structure. Groups the elements by physical and temporal caesuras.

At the level: 0-form - Formal level
Formal appearance, written forms.

Description level: 1-pres - Formal representation

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