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Analysis of the Haiku structure

church graveyard
a cloud of crows hover
over stone angels

cimetière d'église
un nuage de corneilles plane
sur les anges de pierre


Liu Chen-ou, Canada
cco 2016-05-2

Commentaire.

Haïku basé sur des oppositions (Vivant versus Mineral, léger versus lourd, Haut versus Bas) et animé par l'archétype de la Mort. Opposition à un niveau plus profond entre le religieux (église, anges) et le vieux fond païen (corneilles noires).C'est aussi un haïku d'atmosphère, assez lourde, inquiétante. L'image des oiseaux noirs est aussi le moteur du film 'Les Oiseaux" d'Hitchcock (1963).

Keywords

bird death cemetery

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

* atmosphère - Atmosphere.
Something emerges from all the elements that constitute haiku: a climate, an atmosphere. The author does not state this explicitly. It is the reader who reconstructs it from his or her own experience.

This is especially true in three-segment haiku, also called "grocery list". But this effect can also be achieved in other ways.

The mention of feelings related to the weather and taste adds a multisensory dimension to the atmosphere created.

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Mort - Death.

Contexte de mort (deuil, décès, cimetière...) ou pulsion de mort (guerre, violence...).

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