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Analysis of the Haiku structure

prometna konica
seme topola jadra
v izpušnih plinih

rush hour traffic
poplar seeds drifting
through exhaust fumes

heure de pointe
des graines de peuplier dérivent
parmi les fumées des autos


Polona Oblak, Slovenia
cco 2016-05-2

Commentaire.

Haïku reposant sur des oppositions : monde mécanisé versus Nature, matériel versus vivant, lourdeur versus légèreté, monde pressé versus lenteur, temps linéaire de la vie moderne versus temps cyclique des saisons.

Keywords

traffic urban flower car

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

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