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dernier métro
la nuit plus intense
le regard des hommes aussi


Jeanne Painchaud, Canada
cco 2016-05-2

Commentaire.

C'est ici le schéma que j'appelle "la Réalité augmentée". L'auteure perçoit l'augmentation d'intensité d'un des éléments de la situation. Quelque chose est perçu comme différent, plus intense. Et c'est tout le haïku qui en devient plus actif.

Keywords

metro woman night

Structure of this haiku.

Schema and motifs :

Schéma : sss032 Enhanced reality.
  Motif : mmm059 - Enhanced feeling.

Used techniques :


* avis - Opinion given by the author.
The author tells his/her views or an explanation. The speech is not neutral at the first level of reading/writing. This is not a haiku where the author explains to the reader what he or she should understand, usually completed and of no interest. Here, the author gives an indication that is part of the elements of the discourse in addition to the others and that is not a redundancy (redundancy, precision, explanation).

Effects: liavec - Binding to the reader's experience.


At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 3-aut - Author's role


* plus - Enhanced reality.
Something becomes more... A detail is getting stronger.

Effects: liadyn - Binding with dynamics effects


At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 2-strs - Organization, surface structures

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