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počasen grom
kuščarjeva rebra
pritisnjena ob beton

slow thunder
a lizard's ribs pressed
against concrete

roulement de tonnerre
les côtes d'un lézard pressées
contre le béton


Polona Oblak, Slovenia
cco 2016-06-1

Commentaire.

Juxtaposition entre le bruit du tonnerre qui roule et l'écrasement. Cette mise en rapport renforce l'image de puissance destructrice, de puissance face au destin matérialisée par la dureté du beton. Archétypes de la Mort et de l'Anéantissement.

Keywords

death thunderstorm concrete lizard

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

* - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Mort - Death.

Contexte de mort (deuil, décès, cimetière...) ou pulsion de mort (guerre, violence...).

* D_Nature - Death.

Contexte de mort (deuil, décès, cimetière...) ou pulsion de mort (guerre, violence...).

* T_Lent - Slow Time.

* - Slow Time.

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