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fosilne školjke
v krušljivi skali –
dolg poletni dež

fossil shells
inside a crumbling rock –
long summer rain

coquilles fossiles
prises dans un rocher effrité -
longue pluie d'été


Polona Oblak, Slovenia
cco 2016-06-1

Commentaire.

Opposition entre la sécheresse, la dureté de la minéralité, l'âge du fossile et l'humidité d'une pluie éphémère (été). Lien cependant entre coquilles et pluie au travers de l'eau. Archétype possible du Réveil; on se plaît à imaginer les coquilles revivre par delà le Temps (autre archétype à l'oeuvre). Le rocher relâchant d'ailleurs sa proie...

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rain shell

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

* S21 - Caesura between L2 and L3.
Caesura between L2 and L3.

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Temps - Time.

* A_Reveil - The Awakening, Reliving.

Quelque chose s'éveille, qui était "endormi". Qui renait après une période d'absence. Il se signale.

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