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Analysis of the Haiku structure

quietly joining
the conversation . . .
prairie stars

se joignant en silence
à la conversation . . .
les étoiles sur la prairie


Julie Warther, USA
cco 2016-06-1

Commentaire.

Magie de ce haïku basé sur l'opposition entre le Haut et le Bas, le Proche et le Lointain qui partagent le sème de l'Infini. On pourrait y trouver aussi une trace de la "musique des sphères", une notion platonicienne de l'harmonie du monde.

Keywords

silence star night

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

Archetypes and dialectics

* D_HautBas - Up <> Down.

Une opposition entre ce qui est en Haut et ce qui est en Bas. Par exemple, le ciel et la terre, les étoiles et les lumières de la ville, les nuages et la mer...

* A_Espace - The Space.

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