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Analysis of the Haiku structure

summer night love
whatever the neighbors
are cooking

nuit d'amour en été
peu importe ce que les voisins
cuisinent


Sondra Byrnes, USA
cco 2016-06-2

Commentaire.

Funny ! Le haïku, c'est la Vie, l'humour, l'impertinence. ne jamais l'oublier. Ce haïku est basé sur une juxtaposition improbable qui crée la surprise. A étudier.

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* juxtaposition - Juxtaposition.
Use of images placed side by side to create an effect superior to that of each separate image. It is not a resonance effect as in similarity but rather a composition effect as in a painting or still life.

As the juxtaposed images have no or very few common semes, they compose a new global image in relation to its components.

* surprise - Unexpected element.
An element of haiku is unexpected. In view of the speech, we would have thought of one element and it is another that creates a surprise effect.

* fin - Final element give the clue.
A detail at the end reveals the real meaning of haiku.

* - Final element give the clue.
A detail at the end reveals the real meaning of haiku.

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