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Analysis of the Haiku structure

neighbors shouting
from the wild grapes
multiple bird calls


Adelaide Shaw, USA
cco 2016-06-2

Commentaire.

La mise en parallèle de situations est souvent efficace. Elle se passe d'explication et est donc une technique efficace. Et puis, voir la même chose dite deux fois de manière différente permet de bien la saisir. Et dans ce cas de la relativiser.

Keywords

argument neighbor bird humour

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* simili - Similitudes.
Use of images with common semes. The sharing of common semes (qualities, characteristics) makes images reinforce each other. There is resonance because the mind makes the relationship between the two images.

A cup of tea and a lake share the fact that they are an expanse of liquid surrounded by a rim. We can "see" the image of one in the other.

* - Similitudes.
Use of images with common semes. The sharing of common semes (qualities, characteristics) makes images reinforce each other. There is resonance because the mind makes the relationship between the two images.

A cup of tea and a lake share the fact that they are an expanse of liquid surrounded by a rim. We can "see" the image of one in the other.

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