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in french perks
thrissels growe
...seeds frae hame

in french fields
thistles grow
...seeds from home

dans les champs français
les chardons poussent
... les graines de chez nous


John McDonald, Scotland (UK)
cco 2016-07-1

Commentaire.

Une variante du haïku de Bashô ("herbes d'été..."). Mais le schéma n'est pas le même. Il n'y a pas de rêves des guerreurs. Seulement des chardons. En fait, le discours profond est identique, mais le discours de surface plus minimaliste.

Keywords

war flower

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :


* T3 - Stalling at the beginning of L3.
Stalling at the beginning of L3.

Effects: liadyn - Binding with dynamics effects


At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 2-strs - Organization, surface structures


* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

Effects: liainc - Binding to the Unconscious


At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 6-inf - Active infrastructure (archetypes, dialectics)

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Vie - Life.

Toute manifestation d'un être pour affirmer sa présence, sa survie, parfois dans un contexte qui lui est défavorable.

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