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je n’ai pas sommeil
au loin tourne le phare
de la Tour Eiffel


Louis Nagara, France
cco 2016-08-2

Commentaire.

Un haïku d'insomnie. La Lumière qui tourne dans la Nuit, c'est le dormeur éveillé. Une similitude riche basée sur la Veille, sur l'archétype de la Lumière dans la Nuit.Il y a un sentiment spécial à être seul à veiller sur la ville endormie.

Keywords

insomnia light night

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* auteur - Presence of the author.
Presence of the author in the haiku, the author stages himself but does not necessarily speak about him.

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Lumière - The Light.

La Lumière.
A mettre en relation avec la Lumière dans la Nuit.

* A_LumiereNuit - The Light in the Night.

Tout ce qui apparait au propre comme au figuré comme une lumière dans la nuit. Un espoir, le bout du tunnel. Un abri. Le phare. La survivance d'une chose noyée dans un univers "hostile".

* A_SeulNuit - Alone in the Night.

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