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Analysis of the Haiku structure

les motos
roulent quatre par quatre -
derniers jours d'août


Luce Pelletier, Canada
cco 2016-08-2

Commentaire.

Haïku basé sur un élément culturel. Les motards ont une image différente en Amérique et en Europe. Il y a aussi ce contexte continental où l'hiver est plus froid et limite l'usage de la moto à certaines période de l'année. Il peut être donc difficile à comprendre.

Keywords

motorcycle

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :


* S21 - Caesura between L2 and L3.
Caesura between L2 and L3.

Effects: liadyn - Binding with dynamics effects


At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 2-strs - Organization, surface structures


* culturel - Use of external cultural reference.
The haiku is based on an external cultural element, well known by the reader. There is a sharing of an environment (place, situation...) or cultural element (music, painting...) that will seek memories or sensations in the memory and experience of the reader. This device saves a lot of space, nothing else is needed, the effect is achieved by the reader's contribution.

Effects: liavec - Binding to the reader's experience.


At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 5-strp - Deep structure (schemas, patterns, cultural, associations, similarities)

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