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Analysis of the Haiku structure

leaden clouds . . .
the way the bare trees
support them

nuages plombés . . .
la manière dont les arbres nus
le supportent


Bill Waters, USA
cco 2016-09-1

Commentaire.

J'aimais bien l'image. On peut regretter l'avis de l'auteur, mais la force de l'image l'emporte. C'est cela aussi la cotation d'un haïku. Il a parfois un trait qui l'emporte.

Keywords

sky tree

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* avis - Opinion given by the author.
The author tells his/her views or an explanation. The speech is not neutral at the first level of reading/writing. This is not a haiku where the author explains to the reader what he or she should understand, usually completed and of no interest. Here, the author gives an indication that is part of the elements of the discourse in addition to the others and that is not a redundancy (redundancy, precision, explanation).

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