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Analysis of the Haiku structure

a crack
in the pavement
yellow freesias

une fente
dans le trottoir
des freesias jaunes


Owen Bullock, Australia
cco 2016-09-1

Commentaire.

La Vie qui l'emporte. Schéma fréquent, mais, avec ici, un motif original. Opposition entre dureté minérale du beton et fragilité du végétal. A notre une mention assez rare de la couleur jaune, peu présente en haïku.

Keywords

street flower color yellow

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Vie - Life.

Toute manifestation d'un être pour affirmer sa présence, sa survie, parfois dans un contexte qui lui est défavorable.

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