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Analysis of the Haiku structure

whale sighting--
all the smart phones
lined up on the deck

observation des baleines --
tous les smartphones
alignés sur le pont

Robyn Cairns, Australia
cco 2016-09-2


Image fréquente du monde moderne mais rarement rencontrée dans le haïku. Le moteur de celui-ci est formé d'oppositions. Monde moderne versus Nature, futilité versus choses basales, humains versus animaux.


humour whale smartphone

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

Effects: liadyn - Binding with dynamics effects

At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 2-strs - Organization, surface structures

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