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Analysis of the Haiku structure

her face
in my whiisky
the moon floats

son visage
dans mon whisky
la lune flotte


Liu Chen-ou, Canada
the 2016-04-1

Commentaire.

L2 en pivot.

Comments.

Pivot in L2.

Keywords

moon face woman humour alcool

Structure of this haiku.

Schema and motifs :

Schéma : sss018 The Sky on Earth.
  Motif : mmm015 - Moon in the bowl.

Used techniques :


* pivot - Pivotal element.
Use of a pivot element as a link between two different parts of the haiku. This element belongs to both parts.

Effects: liadyn - Binding with dynamics effects


At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 2-trait - Style,subject handling

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