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Analysis of the Haiku structure

her face
in my whiisky
the moon floats

son visage
dans mon whisky
la lune flotte


Liu Chen-ou, Canada
the 2016-04-1

Commentaire.

L2 en pivot.

Comments.

Pivot in L2.

Keywords

moon face woman humour alcool

Structure of this haiku.

Schema and motifs :

Schéma :
  Motif : mmm015 -

Used techniques :

* pivot - Pivotal element.
Use of a pivot element as a link between two different parts of the haiku. This element belongs to both parts.

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