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Analysis of the Haiku structure

migrating geese --
no one asks them
where they're from

migration d'oies --
personne ne leur demande
d'où elles viennent


Paul David Mena, USA
cco 2016-10-1

Commentaire.

Haïku politique et engagé sans en avoir l'air. Le message n'est pas exprimé explicitement. Il n'en passe que mieux.

Keywords

bird migration social

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* avis - Opinion given by the author.
The author tells his/her views or an explanation. The speech is not neutral at the first level of reading/writing. This is not a haiku where the author explains to the reader what he or she should understand, usually completed and of no interest. Here, the author gives an indication that is part of the elements of the discourse in addition to the others and that is not a redundancy (redundancy, precision, explanation).

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