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Analysis of the Haiku structure

insomnia
the sound of a goose
lost in the night

insomnie
le bruit d'une oie
perdue dans la nuit


Beth Fisher, USA
cco 2016-10-1

Commentaire.

Haïku à plusieurs niveaux de lecture. On peut que le discours profond plonge dans l'Inconscient car il est porté par des archétypes puissants : la Nuit, l'Appel, la Perte du chemin, le Voyage. Ce motif de l'Appel dans la Nuit est fréquent.

Keywords

insomnia sound bird night

Structure of this haiku.

Schema and motifs :

Schéma : sss013 Insomnia and something's happening.
  Motif : mmm049 - A sound, somewhere at night.

Schéma : sss031 The call, the scream. Something's draw attention without being visible.
  Motif : mmm056 - The call of the bird.

Used techniques :


* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

Effects: liainc - Binding to the Unconscious


At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 6-inf - Active infrastructure (archetypes, dialectics)


* psycho - Haiku with a psychological background.
Haiku can have a reading level that expresses an underlying psychological situation that is still active. It is not sure if this analysis is accurate. It can simply exist in the reader's mind. It is almost always absent from the author's intention, as can be seen from the author's request for information.

Effects: liainc - Binding to the Unconscious


At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 5-vecu - Personal(Experienced, psycho, acquired...)

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Nuit - The Night.

La nuit primale, avec son obscurité, ses "dangers", ses mystères et nos peurs millénaires.

* A_Cri - The Cry.

Le cri. Un être produit un son bref. Sans relation avec les causes de ce cri. Il peut être en relation avec la douleur, la peur, la violence, l'effort. Ce n'est pas nécessairement un appel pour nous.

Parfois relié à l'Appel.

* A_Appel - The Call.

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