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Analysis of the Haiku structure

Ouverture de chasse –
La pesanteur du brouillard
sur mes épaules


Danièle Etienne-Georgelin, France
cco 2016-10-1

Commentaire.

En principe, je ne prends pas de haïku où l'auteur exprime ses sentiments de manière si abstraite (pesanteur) mais l'image est si forte et le discours si efficace qu'il en vaut vraiment la peine.

Keywords

hunting mist

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* poesie - Use of poetical devices.
Use of poetical devices.

* avis - Opinion given by the author.
The author tells his/her views or an explanation. The speech is not neutral at the first level of reading/writing. This is not a haiku where the author explains to the reader what he or she should understand, usually completed and of no interest. Here, the author gives an indication that is part of the elements of the discourse in addition to the others and that is not a redundancy (redundancy, precision, explanation).

* auteur - Presence of the author.
Presence of the author in the haiku, the author stages himself but does not necessarily speak about him.

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