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Analysis of the Haiku structure

post-election
washing the dishes
doing the laundry

post-élection
laver la vaisselle
faire la lessive


Bill Kenney, USA
cco 2016-11-1

Commentaire.

Haiku à structure de "liste de commission", c'est à dire une juxtaposition d'éléments, un par ligne (segments). Mais ici, la structure est un peu particulière : une situation (contexte) en L1 et deux verbes en L2 et L3 qui portent le discours profond dans leur similitude.

Keywords

politics washing dishes

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :


* S3 - Three elements haiku.
Three independent elements compose the haiku. Also known as the grocery list.

Effects: reinter - Reworking at the end.


At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 2-strs - Organization, surface structures


* juxtaposition - Juxtaposition.
Use of images placed side by side to create an effect superior to that of each separate image. It is not a resonance effect as in similarity but rather a composition effect as in a painting or still life.

As the juxtaposed images have no or very few common semes, they compose a new global image in relation to its components.

Effects: liadyn - Binding with dynamics effects


At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 5-strp - Deep structure (schemas, patterns, cultural, associations, similarities)

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