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Analysis of the Haiku structure

post-election
washing the dishes
doing the laundry

post-élection
laver la vaisselle
faire la lessive


Bill Kenney, USA
cco 2016-11-1

Commentaire.

Haiku à structure de "liste de commission", c'est à dire une juxtaposition d'éléments, un par ligne (segments). Mais ici, la structure est un peu particulière : une situation (contexte) en L1 et deux verbes en L2 et L3 qui portent le discours profond dans leur similitude.

Keywords

politics washing dishes

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* S3 - Three elements haiku.
Three independent elements compose the haiku. Also known as the grocery list.

* juxtaposition - Juxtaposition.
Use of images placed side by side to create an effect superior to that of each separate image. It is not a resonance effect as in similarity but rather a composition effect as in a painting or still life.

As the juxtaposed images have no or very few common semes, they compose a new global image in relation to its components.

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