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sous les arbres roux
de la blonde plantureuse
le parfum

under the red trees
from the busty blonde
the perfume


Patrick Fetu, France
cco 2016-11-1

Commentaire.

Archétype de la Rencontre. Juste suggérée avec une touche d'érotisme et de luxe (parfum). Image multisensorielle. Le roux ajoute à l'érotisme de la femme plantureuse par sa résonnance.

Keywords

erotic woman color red

Structure of this haiku.

Schema and motifs :

Schéma :
  Motif : mmm081 -

Used techniques :

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* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

* simili - Similitudes.
Use of images with common semes. The sharing of common semes (qualities, characteristics) makes images reinforce each other. There is resonance because the mind makes the relationship between the two images.

A cup of tea and a lake share the fact that they are an expanse of liquid surrounded by a rim. We can "see" the image of one in the other.

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Rencontre - The Unexpected Encounter.

La rencontre fortuite entre deux êtres avec un moment où quelque chose se passe entre eux.

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