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Analysis of the Haiku structure

day-long rain;
I organize
my watercolors

journée de pluie;
je mets de l'ordre dans
mes aquarelles


Brian Austin Darnell, USA
cco 2016-11-2

Commentaire.

Malgré la référence à la pluie, il ne s'agit pas d'un haïku meteo. L'auteur n'utilise pas la pluie pour accentuer une atmosphere.

Keywords

rain color humour

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

* - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

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