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Analysis of the Haiku structure

Oooh!
la neige a volé du voleur
les traces de ses pieds


Mohamad Alsari, Syria
cco 2016-12-1

Commentaire.

On dirait un haïku classique japonais. A remarquer l'utilisation d'une interjection, très rare.

Keywords

snow footprint

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :


* xxx - Undefined appeal.
Haïku having something undefinable that deserves further study.

Effects: liainc - Binding to the Unconscious


At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 5-strp - Deep structure (schemas, patterns, cultural, associations, similarities)

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