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Analysis of the Haiku structure

soirée d'automne
la machine à coudre
berce la maison


Gérard Dumon, France
cco 2016-12-1

Effet d'atomsphère basé sur les sons. Assez rare.

Keywords

evening sound

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* atmosphere - Atmosphere.
Something emerges from all the elements that constitute haiku: a climate, an atmosphere. The author does not state this explicitly. It is the reader who reconstructs it from his or her own experience.

This is especially true in three-segment haiku, also called "grocery list". But this effect can also be achieved in other ways.

The mention of feelings related to the weather and taste adds a multisensory dimension to the atmosphere created.

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