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Analysis of the Haiku structure

closed window
a bee lies so stillamong
faded pollen

(fenêtre fermée
une abeille posée si calmement parmi
du pollen décoloré)


Catherine, USA
cco 2016-12-1

Commentaire.

En quelques mots tout le drame de cette abeille piègée par une fenêtre trop tôt refermée.

Keywords

bee death window

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* detail - A detail is the key element of the haiku.
The strength of these haikus lies in a detail, either in its relationship to other elements or images, or in its own strength. It plays the active role and will be remembered.

We can recognize there the action of the archetype of the ActivePoint.

* fin - Final element give the clue.
A detail at the end reveals the real meaning of haiku.

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Mort - Death.

Contexte de mort (deuil, décès, cimetière...) ou pulsion de mort (guerre, violence...).

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