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Analysis of the Haiku structure

me
and the mountain
winter solstice

moi
et la montagne
solstice d'hiver


Sandi Pray, USA
cco 2016-12-2

Commentaire.

Juxtaposition d'éléments L1-2 et L3. C'est un haïku immobile, silencieux. Comme le cycle du temps qui bascule au solstice de l'hiver.

Keywords

mountain solstice_2

Structure of this haiku.

Schema and motifs :

Schéma :
  Motif : mmm079 -

Used techniques :

* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

* auteur - Presence of the author.
Presence of the author in the haiku, the author stages himself but does not necessarily speak about him.

* S21 - Caesura between L2 and L3.
Caesura between L2 and L3.

Archetypes and dialectics

* D_MoiMonde - I versus the World

Mention d'un être qui se dstincte par rapport au reste du Monde.

* D_GrandPetit - Big <> Little.

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