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Analysis of the Haiku structure

starry night -
out on the highway
a truck changes gears

Nuit étoilée -
sur la grand route
un camion change de vitesse


Brian Austin Darnell, USA
cco 2016-12-2

Commentaire.

Voici un motif que l'on rencontre parfois. Un bruit de route, de train, sous le ciel de la nuit. Parfois dans une plaine en hiver. Cela dénote notre ouïe plus attentive à ces moments de le journée. Lee Gurga en a écrit un similaire vers 1998.Archétype du Voyage.

Keywords

night sound highway

Structure of this haiku.

Schema and motifs :

Schéma : sss042 Distant sounds of trafic at night.
  Motif : mmm087 - Distant sounds of trafic in a (cold) night.

Used techniques :


* son - Active sounds in the text.
Use of sonorities in the text. Sound plays an active and central role in the discourse. The mention of the named sound imitates the sound heard.

Effects: liasen - Binding with sensorial feelings.


At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 2-trait - Style,subject handling


* xxx - Undefined appeal.
Haïku having something undefinable that deserves further study.

Effects: liainc - Binding to the Unconscious


At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 5-strp - Deep structure (schemas, patterns, cultural, associations, similarities)


* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

Effects: liainc - Binding to the Unconscious


At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 6-inf - Active infrastructure (archetypes, dialectics)

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Voyage - The Travel.

Le voyage, la migration... Lié à la Route qui elle est plus en potentialités que le Voyage qui est action.

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