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solstice d’hiver –
ma fille prépare
le médicament antirejet


Michel Duflo, France
cco 2016-12-2

Commentaire.

Le solstice d'hiver est le moment où la lumière après avoir diminué, recommence à croître, où l'Espoir des beaux jours revient. Il y a ici une continuité dans le discours profond malgré une rupture dans el discours de surface. Espérons que ce haïku porte chance et que les beaux jours reviennent.

Keywords

solstice_2 illness medecine

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* xxx - Undefined appeal.
Haïku having something undefinable that deserves further study.

* juxtaposition - Juxtaposition.
Use of images placed side by side to create an effect superior to that of each separate image. It is not a resonance effect as in similarity but rather a composition effect as in a painting or still life.

As the juxtaposed images have no or very few common semes, they compose a new global image in relation to its components.

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