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Analysis of the Haiku structure

tout est calme
dans la pénombre du soir
la notice du jouet


Vincent Hoarau, France
cco 2016-12-2

Commentaire.

Juxtaposition inattendue. On aurait attendu le jouet rangé après que l'enfant soit allé dormir. Et non, c'est la notice qui fait le discours. Audacieux et réussi. Ne jamais hésiter à sortir de son discours convenu pour utiliser un élément inattendu afin de produire l'effet.

Keywords

Christmas toy evening silence humour

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* juxtaposition - Juxtaposition.
Use of images placed side by side to create an effect superior to that of each separate image. It is not a resonance effect as in similarity but rather a composition effect as in a painting or still life.

As the juxtaposed images have no or very few common semes, they compose a new global image in relation to its components.

* partie - Active small part for the whole.
A small part is linked to a bigger. The part for the Whole.

* - Active small part for the whole.
A small part is linked to a bigger. The part for the Whole.

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