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Analysis of the Haiku structure

tout est calme
dans la pénombre du soir
la notice du jouet


Vincent Hoarau, France
cco 2016-12-2

Commentaire.

Juxtaposition inattendue. On aurait attendu le jouet rangé après que l'enfant soit allé dormir. Et non, c'est la notice qui fait le discours. Audacieux et réussi. Ne jamais hésiter à sortir de son discours convenu pour utiliser un élément inattendu afin de produire l'effet.

Keywords

Christmas toy evening silence humour

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :


* juxtaposition - Juxtaposition.
Use of images placed side by side to create an effect superior to that of each separate image. It is not a resonance effect as in similarity but rather a composition effect as in a painting or still life.

As the juxtaposed images have no or very few common semes, they compose a new global image in relation to its components.

Effects: liadyn - Binding with dynamics effects


At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 5-strp - Deep structure (schemas, patterns, cultural, associations, similarities)


* partie - Active small part for the whole.
A small part is linked to a bigger. The part for the Whole.

Effects: liadyn - Binding with dynamics effects


At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 2-strs - Organization, surface structures

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