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Analysis of the Haiku structure

empty house
painting over
the growth mark wall

(maison vide
peindre par dessus
les marques de croissance sur le mur)


cudd cwmwl, UK
cco 2017-01-1

Commentaire.

Haïku marqué par l'archétype du Temps qui passe. Une histoire passée, la croissance d'un enfant, notée année après année, que l'on efface en repeignant le mur. On peut supposer que la maison a été abandonnée longtemps et qu'elle va revivre avec le nouveau propriétaire. On serait donc là dans le schéma de la Vie qui triomphe mais pas d'elle même. C'est la variante d'une vie nouvelle.

Keywords

house wall mark growth child time

Structure of this haiku.

Schema and motifs :

Schéma : sss029 Something reminds us of the Past.
  Motif : mmm058 - Physical detail that recalls a memory.

Schéma : sss045 Marks of Time
  Motif : mmm096 - Growth scale markers

Used techniques :


* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

Effects: liainc - Binding to the Unconscious


At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 6-inf - Active infrastructure (archetypes, dialectics)


* sabi - Sabi
The sabi is a concept of Japanese aesthetics, derived from Zen Buddhist concepts, linked to the feeling created by the alteration by time, the decrepitude of aging things, the patina of objects, the mark of Time. The charm of things that have lived (Vintage des Américains).

Are sabi: Used steps from an old staircase, worn clothing, a rusty railing, a patinated knob...

In connection with Sabi-wabi.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Japanese_aesthetics

Effects: liainc - Binding to the Unconscious


At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 5-strp - Deep structure (schemas, patterns, cultural, associations, similarities)


* detail - A detail is the key element of the haiku.
The strength of these haikus lies in a detail, either in its relationship to other elements or images, or in its own strength. It plays the active role and will be remembered.

We can recognize there the action of the archetype of the ActivePoint.

Effects: reinter - Reworking at the end.


At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 2-strs - Organization, surface structures

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Temps - Time.

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