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Analysis of the Haiku structure

city traffic
ants in and out
of a sparrow

trafic urbain
des fourmis entrent et sortent
d'un moineau


Brendon Kent, England
cco 2017-01-1

Commentaire.

Le haïku n'est pas toujours "zen"... Il est pour moi meilleur lorsqu'il parle de la vraie vie avec ses malheurs, ses peines. L1 utilise un mode percutant pour introduire le sujet. Il y a ici une césure après L1. Elle marque une transition superficielle dans le discours. Le discours profond, lui, reste continu.

Keywords

death bird ant

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

* simili - Similitudes.
Use of images with common semes. The sharing of common semes (qualities, characteristics) makes images reinforce each other. There is resonance because the mind makes the relationship between the two images.

A cup of tea and a lake share the fact that they are an expanse of liquid surrounded by a rim. We can "see" the image of one in the other.

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Mort - Death.

Contexte de mort (deuil, décès, cimetière...) ou pulsion de mort (guerre, violence...).

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