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Analysis of the Haiku structure

midnight coffee
a spoonful of sugar
stirred into the darkness

café de minuit
une cuillère de sucre
mélangée aux ténèbres


Chase Gagnon, USA
cco 2017-01-1

Commentaire.

Haïku un peu "noir", à l'atmosphère lourde. Utilisation du sucre comme réconfort. L3 creuse le mystère et donne à ce haïku une ouverture active.

Keywords

midnight cup coffee sugar

Structure of this haiku.

Schema and motifs :

Schéma :
  Motif : mmm086 -

Used techniques :

* simili - Similitudes.
Use of images with common semes. The sharing of common semes (qualities, characteristics) makes images reinforce each other. There is resonance because the mind makes the relationship between the two images.

A cup of tea and a lake share the fact that they are an expanse of liquid surrounded by a rim. We can "see" the image of one in the other.

* yugen - Yugen.
Yugen is a concept of Japanese aesthetics that can be expressed as deep, mysterious, dark, troubled.... In criticism of Japanese poetry, he expresses a subtle depth of things that are vaguely evoked in the poem.

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

* - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_PointActif - Active point (color, sound, ...)

Variante de la Couleur. Ici, c'est un point, généralement de couleur qui a le rôle important. En fait, cet archétype illustre le fait que c'est l'Inconscient qui analyse les images de notre regard. C'est lui qui repère ces points et y dirige notre regard.

* A_Nuit - The Night.

La nuit primale, avec son obscurité, ses "dangers", ses mystères et nos peurs millénaires.

* D_ChaudFroid - Warm <> Cold.

* T_Immobile - Frozen Time.

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