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Analysis of the Haiku structure

oeuf à la coque -
trois minutes à regarder
tomber la neige


Virginie Colpart, France
cco 2017-01-1

Commentaire.

Juxtaposition-opposition originale entre la cuisson des oeufs (chaleur) et la neige (froid). C'est, malgré la brièveté du moment, un haiku sur le Temps qui passe et, dans ce cas-ci, sa lenteur. Similitude possible entre le blanc (de l'oeuf) et celui de la neige.

Keywords

egg snow cooking time

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

* juxtaposition - Juxtaposition.
Use of images placed side by side to create an effect superior to that of each separate image. It is not a resonance effect as in similarity but rather a composition effect as in a painting or still life.

As the juxtaposed images have no or very few common semes, they compose a new global image in relation to its components.

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Temps - Time.

* D_IntExt - In <> Out.

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